Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters ( such as food, clothes, and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is imp

The scheme illustrates how electricity can be produced by the collaboration of physics and natural processes.
Electricity producing chain has 5 major milestones and these steps are far away from the notion of electricity for the first glimpse. It stars from the tank where cold water is located and then is pressured deep down for 4.5 kilometers to the zone of hot rocks by the injection well. There the cold water is heated and that it is lifted up to a condenser by the pressure of the production well.
From this step the hot water that is enclosed in the tank is producing steam due to the high temperature. After that steam is turning the turbine on, so it is starting to turns over and fuels the generator with the power. Eventually, the generator provides electricity to a power station that is connected with others stations which can be located through the whole city.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'turn'.
Suggestion: turn
...ng the turbine on, so it is starting to turns over and fuels the generator with the p...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 729.0 1615.20841683 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 154.0 315.596192385 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73376623377 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69518069673 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 176.041082164 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 506.74238477 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 17.7016083669 49.4020404114 36% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.142857143 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00660757713645 0.244688304435 3% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00274505401485 0.084324248473 3% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00672398165276 0.0667982634062 10% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00376690431601 0.151304729494 2% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00532720717187 0.056905535591 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 78.4519038076 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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