Nowadays there a lot of people who argue about the necessity of letting immatures to decide how they should look like, what to eat and how to spend their leisure time.
On the one hand, it is clear that it is vital for children to make their own decisions. There are a lot of studies that show that there is a strong correlation between happiness, success and childhood. Ones who were able to decide how they should behave and were a little bit less controlled by parents are much happier and confident now. Furthermore, decisions that were made by teenagers themselves could be crucial for their position in live. Freedom of choice gives you a chance to try something new, uncommon and find something that you can be keened on in future.
But there are still those who believe that it is not the best way to treat children. They don't have enough life experience so they could be affected by some drug or alcohol addicts and this could turn over their whole lives. Moreover, there are a lot of stories when parents were strict to their kids, but eventually it turns out that it is worth it. Children are grateful and understand that even though sometimes it was hard to handle the pressure, it provided them a better life.
From my point of view, it is an unpredictable process and the best way is to find a balance, not to choose one of the extremes and never reconsider your decision. Life is flexible and dynamic, so should be you.
Taking into consideration all mentioned above it can be mentioned that both paths of treating kids are having rights to exist and the only difference between them is your own situation and solution to it.
- The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 11
- The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 11
- Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters ( such as food, clothes, and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is imp 11
- The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 26
- Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters ( such as food, clothes, and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is imp 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 265, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...ecide how they should behave and were a little bit less controlled by parents are much hap...
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Line 2, column 559, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ind something that you can be keened on in future. But there are still those who believe...
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Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ot the best way to treat children. They dont have enough life experience so they cou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58305084746 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4543543375 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576271186441 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6750994001 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165036093708 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544808622897 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573188519071 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.078752803728 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479568071777 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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