Some people believe that animal should be allowed to be eaten and experimented on while other think they have equal right as human being, discuss both views and your opinion.
Nowdays, contravaction about asymmetry and conservation beasts is the hot issues in several countries and circles. Some of them consider that beasts permitted to consumption and made tentative, opposite to another opinion that said beasts have the same position with human. I will discuss both of this view with my own idea.
Firstly, what happen in the future can't control by own self, sometimes beasts being some compulsory to consumption. In other words, condition of someone always changed and the altertinative of several problem also different and this case same with beasts, this condition became when someone feel threatened and should be survive for life, usually people consuming beasts as a medicine and the medicine was supported by research or previous experiment. For example, snake is wild beast and dangerous, not all people can consume this meal but sometimes people should be eaten to recovery their health, whereas if we look back at 2019 when covid 19 spread in all the world, all of researcher found peak of the problem derived from bats and they decided to made experiments about this beast. So, fundamentally beasts can give alternative for human to found the best way from their problem such as medicine.
On the other hand, many people contrary to this notion and think that this is bad behaviour because all creatures have a same position and should be conserved. Moreover, Attitude of human sometime very excessive and impressed selfish without thinking about beasts, the impact of their habit made some beast endangered. Furthermore, this condition made human look a bad person because always follow their instinct, in fact, human and beasts is the same creature lived in earth and should be life side by side, hence as human we must think about life of beasts. As illustration, Kangaroo very protected by Australia government, the population of this beasts steadily slightly and should be conservation because this is the eminent beast in the world. So, society and government have a relationship to kept this habitat.
To conclude, every beasts have the same treatment with human and should be kept the population of this beasts, if someone need beasts as medice or something important just use based on necessary.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'several problems'.
Suggestion: several problems
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Suggestion: feels
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Message: Did you mean 'survived'?
Suggestion: survived
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, look, moreover, so, whereas, for example, in fact, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1881.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12534059946 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65943404633 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534059945504 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.3748435157 49.4020404114 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.692307692 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2307692308 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0769230769 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232711086795 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918044834203 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498361409608 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146573735269 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341686072597 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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