When children start school teachers have more influence on their intellectual and social development than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Teachers have a big role to establish intelligence and socialisation ability for pupil at education center and that role exceed their parents. I fully agree with this opinion and think that a teachers have big effect for student more than parents since their in school.
Firstly, the intellecuatual can created by establishment characteristics of student. In other words, all children will be source knowledge in many fields and for get it should be stay at scholl. Whereas, teachers will be starting by teaching basic things that can increase their science and parents only encourage what teachers teach at scholl. For example, before a child study they are never know about subject at school, can't reading and writing and everything about leason, however when in scholl they are will get everything like know about math, english study and become a smart people even fluent in several subject. That's why teacher the most important than parents for resulting the best talent of pupil.
Secondly, teachers have task to developing personality, nature and respect for another people particulary with older people. Mentally of someone is different and all categories come from themselves. Moreover, each student have bad and good attitude before they are know about it basically that tend have the fake behave and more disrespectful with another people they only follow their feeling without thinking about another aspect. For instance, when child stay at home and spend time with their family they are always being not nice, based on what i look around me the child always talking a loud with their parents and sometimes angry if what they want was not fulfilled that is as evidence for bad social became in their neighbourhood. Thus, whatever situation can changed behaviour of the child and so school is the first place that able to make soul of social can high levels.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 191, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a teacher' or simply 'teachers'?
Suggestion: a teacher; teachers
... agree with this opinion and think that a teachers have big effect for student more than p...
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Line 2, column 179, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'staid', 'stayed'?
Suggestion: staid; stayed
...in many fields and for get it should be stay at scholl. Whereas, teachers will be st...
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Line 2, column 394, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
...le, before a child study they are never know about subject at school, cant reading a...
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Line 2, column 424, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...are never know about subject at school, cant reading and writing and everything abou...
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Line 2, column 624, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
... people even fluent in several subject. Thats why teacher the most important than par...
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Line 3, column 25, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'tasked'.
Suggestion: tasked
...lent of pupil. Secondly, teachers have task to developing personality, nature and r...
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Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
...e bad and good attitude before they are know about it basically that tend have the f...
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Line 3, column 550, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...re always being not nice, based on what i look around me the child always talking...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07467532468 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54302453252 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594155844156 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.2717070605 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.25 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268404041785 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095357220461 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825238803458 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195448945168 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491603284967 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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