Some people believe arts are important in people's lives. Do you agree or disagree?
Although making arts needs high cost, it is justifiable that arts are essential in society since those become an interested media to inform thoughts in communication ways.
A notion in the role of art creation in people's lives is arguable since more budget is needed to realize it, showing an opportunity cost that might be allocated to other principal human necessities. That is to say, performing arts needs some high cost materials, making the benefit that could be obtained from the arts being lesser than the spent funds. For example, some people in Jakarta spend their money around IDR 500.000 to buy canvass and inks in order to make beautiful paintings, shifting their budgets for food consumptions or buying cloths just for realizing those arts.
On the contrary with previous argument, it is justifiable that art is essential factor in people life as one of interesting ways to communicate some ideas, seemingly more ethic than narrate by words. Since art as a platform of communications, artists can visualize their thought through artworks that can be understood by other people as message receiver. For instance, some factory workers that have ability to paint acceptable cartoon in their community, they make it in the public walls in order to realize their ideas that refuse the local government policy related to regional minimum wages that be set lower than they expected.
In conclusion, while some budgets have to be spent in order to make beautiful arts, it is vital in society's live since arts become one of feasible ways to realize concept to other people. It is suggested that government to support their citizen to explore their abilities in making arts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the contrary, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08633093525 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63332939149 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568345323741 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.1988177295 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.111111111 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8888888889 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.77777777778 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175316697019 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813652444949 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444452731354 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108417527144 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414456179461 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.