Some people believe that to be a successful sportsperson, one needs to have a natural ability. Others think that hard work and practice are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People that aim to be famous athletes with many achievements doubt themselves how can be one. Individuals born with talents may answer that question. However, others put a belief in hard-working and practices that lead to success in sport. This essay will examine both sides of the argument.
There are some reasons why they have faith in non-stop training, and that can be the best way to success in sport. Because of hard training, individuals can improve their physicals and many technics that raise the chance to be a successful sportsperson. Furthermore, the more they train, the higher their knowledge can be used to win a match with other enemies who stand in their way to be famous. For instance, Dang Van Lam, a goalkeeper in the U23 football team, was born with no gift. However, throughout countless practice and training, he has become a professional player and played for the National football team.
On the other hand, talented people are still the main subject of favorable when talking about a successful sports individual that have to achieve many reward and medal. If gifted persons use that talent in the right field of sports, they will easily surpass many others in the same places as them. Besides, skills are giving to their owner limitless of the path to success in a field they choose in. For example, when a talented basketball player can play good in either offense or defense, they would make great achievements in every position in the match.
To be concluded, there is an idiom “Diligence in place of intelligence.“ Even though talented people have a more significant start than ordinary ones, I believe in continuous development in healthy people that have considerable determination in their dream to be a successful person in sports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, for example, for instance, talking about, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03367003367 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85790563504 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589225589226 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6279279861 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.785714286 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232775582483 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771357851518 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619453483948 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146038911846 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404744350958 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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