In this day and age, more and more contemporary attention has been placed on the opinion that the most effective method to incentivize children that have a healthy diet at an educational establishment, however, others argue that parents should play a role in teaching their offspring to eat food, which is beneficial to their health. From my perspective, I strongly believe that both ways to encourage children have a healthy diet.
On the one hand, schools are an ideal educational environment to provide useful information about a healthy diet. This is because teachers are trained professionally and well-experienced in educating children on the significance of consuming healthy food, therefore, students will be aware of the fact that if they have healthy meals, their well-being will become more robust. The another reason is the most of children time is spending at school,their parent cannot beside to them all time and give them to have a healthy diet,so their teachers can support on behalf of parents.
On the second hand, it is undeniable that father and mother play an important part in educating their offspring on having fundamental knowledge about consuming healthy dishes. Although the majority of parents rarely spend their time looking for information about food, which is beneficial to children’s health, they still have basic understandings about healthy food, which are enough to teach their child to avoid food that can have negative impacts on their offspring’s health. For instance, parents may talk about the bad effects of eating fast food and encourage their child to eat this kind of food as least as possible and with this advice from parents, children will have less possibility of consuming much fast food in the future.
In conclusion, with all the reasons mentioned above, the best way to encourage children that have a healthy diet is combination with education at school and home.Beacause,both parents and teachers are the human which play a role important in have a heatlthy diet of children.
- Some children find learning history at school very exciting but many others think it is very boring In what ways can history be brought to life for all school children 71
- Some people believe that the best way to encourage children that have a healthy diet at school and some people believe that parents should teach them to have a healthy diet Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, second, so, still, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1714.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20972644377 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92828394619 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495440729483 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.5051700743 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 190.444444444 106.682146367 179% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.5555555556 20.7667163134 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329647329121 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176141750055 0.084324248473 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107896342687 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250654232138 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845840357044 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.4 13.0946893788 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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