some people believe that the best way of learning about life is by listening to the advice of family and friends. other people believe that the best way of learning about life is through personal experiences. compare the advantages of these two different ways of learning about life. which do you think is preferable? use specific examples to support your preference.
Nowadays when the subject of choosing the best way has come up, folks have two separate thoughts. which one is receiving advises from the other people you might know and two challenging the different ways yourself, and learn.
Although, initially, it may seem simple, writing about this complex and controversial topic is not convenient. Because in which multifarious criteria come together as affecting agents. Even though some people might accept just one of the ideas, I think it depends, I really do agree using others experiences has a lot of advantages. but the conditions among people are not the same, hence the same decision might have different outcomes. So I am going to choose both of them. but in some extent the first one might consequence the better way and to some extent the second one. To illustrate my perspective of the issue, I will vindicate ??? reasons in the following essay.
Worthy of mentioning the first dimension should have said, is what you can catch more in experiencing the results in personal challenges, can't be given by others. Despite learning from acquaintances, it is an indisputable fact that not everyone knows each other better than himself.
On the other hand, in approaching the idea, apart from the fact mentioned above, one should consider there is not enough time for every individual to try anything and then select the best one. in this case, it can be exemplified that one of the significant decision in anybody's life is choosing the major in university. To me just account on myself was not a good idea. I remember at that time i couldn't make up my mind. therefore I asked a lot of people and used their experiences and then pick up the best decision I could ever make.
So, as a result, it can be reiterated that the best way for everyone is not sustaining, furthermore, not any human being has enough time to go several ways and accept one of them. so to me using both of these ideas based on our condition, does make more senses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, really, second, so, then, therefore, apart from, i think, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75433526012 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68414991779 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56936416185 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2706236193 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5789473684 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2105263158 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78947368421 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212621387428 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527894209337 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540054793146 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118327019541 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640883863594 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.