some people believe that the best way to travel within a city is by car others believe it is best to travel by bicycle to what extent do you agree or disagree
It cannot be denied that bicycle has been utilized as a eco-friendly mode of transport, having said that fiction of masses consider that car is more convenient than pedal cycle. Nevertheless, i will disclose my view points in favor of riding bicycle for travelling within an urban area in forthcoming paragraphs.
The first and foremost benefit of peddling a cycle on roads of a city is found to make the atmosphere of particular area healthier, since no air as well as noise pollution stemmed by a non-fueled two-wheeler. Moreover, despite being eco-friendly bicycle is also cost-effective, to be owned by people, instead of expensive fueled four-wheeler(car). Owing to this, citizens who find difficulty to subsist in polluted urban areas would be able to have a sigh of relief from congestion. Foreign countries, for instance, have a peaceful environment, as common people and even commuters utilize bikes, which are non-fuel apart from cars. As a consequence, to determine diseases regarding respiration, predominantly, the idea of introducing cycles over cars for commuting through cities is best.
Furthermore, being eco-friendly bicycles also can assist masses to alleviate their sedentary lifestyles, because in this contemporary era, due to hectic schedules more than often mortals tend to commute by fueled forms of transport, as they observe it comfortable. On the other hand, to be as fit as a fiddle abundant individuals waste their money on gyms, but exercising through cycling may be far more behooveful in order to conserve earnings. This can be illustrated by a published survey in 'Times' which reveals that cyclists can burn 60.5% calories by peddling cycle than lifting weights in a gym. Therefore, predicaments such as obese could be diminished easily.
In conclusion, even though there are myriad benefits of driving a car in cities and towns but bicyclists can take numerous fruitful results namely, not only healthy environment but also living styles at reasonable rates.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, therefore, well, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33227848101 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10859860304 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667721518987 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.6378339247 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.416666667 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.5833333333 7.06120827912 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0941510916085 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.034183153618 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361960475281 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.058682894053 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325018833351 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.47 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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