Some people believe that capital punishment should not be used. Others, however, argue that it should be allowed for the most serious crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have various views about whether capital punishment should be implemented or not. While some argue that it is superior to eliminate this kind of punishment, I strongly suppose the view that death should be the punishment for those who commit grave offenses.
For a variety of reasons, there is a growing body of opinion in favor of doing away with capital punishment. From a moral perspective, decimating people is perceived as immorality in a host of countries all over the world and it is totally replaced by other punishments. For instance, a range of European nations has gotten rid of this punishment and created numerous substitutes for them based on the level of crime that people commit. Furthermore, removing capital punishment also enable offenders to contribute to the whole society as a way to give back after committing an infraction. They can take part in labor after prison time and create value for the community. Therefore, a variety of people do not agree with this punishment for serious transgressors.
In spite of the above argument, I strongly support the idea that death is an ideal punishment for those committing serious crimes. Firstly, all of us are afraid of death. Therefore, when death becomes a punishment for crimes, it will spur people to consider their behaviors when they have the intention of committing crimes and in turn, this punishment will beget a decrease in the crime rate. Moreover, decimating grave transgressors helps our society do away with perilous individuals. People who have committed a serious crime in the past are less likely to change their mindset and tend to re-offend after a long time. Due to this fact, capital punishment will eliminate these individuals and ensure a safer live for other citizens. For instance, Nguyen Hai Duong, who killed his ex-girlfriend’s family, was killed after receiving capital punishment and this decision was highly appreciated by the community.
In conclusion, it seems to me that capital punishment must be implemented for those who commit grave offenses.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1731.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1671641791 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90866995071 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54328358209 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5391330742 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.1875 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9375 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294045199369 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995678457503 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740914093859 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204850228381 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805667257979 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1731.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1671641791 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90866995071 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54328358209 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5391330742 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.1875 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9375 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294045199369 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995678457503 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740914093859 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204850228381 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805667257979 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.