Some people believe that in a city, the best way to travel is by car, while other people argue that bicycles are a better way of travelling in a city
There is a prevalent belief that commuting by car is the most superior method in the urban area. Somehow, some groups of people have the contrast prejudice to that notion and assume that cycling is more favorable. From my perspective, although mowing by automobiles is convenient in some specific circumstances, bicycles are more flexible due to their flexibility.
To begin with, there are several reasons why cars are utilized by most people. First, cars will be available in some situations, especially in adverse weather which can cause some ailments in people such as coughing, sneezing and so on and it also enables people to convey groceries more easily and efficiently. Moreover, each car is equipped with a system that can be used to play music or radio, it will allow the commuter to listen to their preferred music during the journey. For instance, if people want to make a short trip to a coastal city to replenish their energy but the weather is anticipated to be inferior, cars will be the most appropriate selection in that circumstance.
However it is easy to be stuck in the congestion and the engine of the automobiles can release a huge amount of black carbon, which can bring about air pollution and harm to people’s health. Instead, bicycles are more reasonable for humans to drive due to a variety of reasons. First, bicycles are eco-friendly to the environment because people use their strength to drive the vehicle, instead of using fuel energy to activate the vehicle. Besides, choosing bicycles as a vehicle also enables people to improve their health and reinforce their immune system and resistance, which helps people from being affected by several diseases such as cardiovascular disease and improve their muscle. For example, driving bicycles helps obese people to lose weight because it helps them to burn calories effectively.
In conclusion, although the importance of cars cannot be neglected, it is not convenient in some cases. Instead, bicycles are more eco-friendly and contribute to the protection of the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in some cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1734.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14540059347 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8542045539 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53115727003 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6109150337 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.857142857 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0714285714 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188308385196 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065632288498 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342869298628 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112964364565 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252001615113 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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