These days , it is believed that everyone could study at university or college .Although this idea is reasonable to some extent , i would argue that student who don not have good ability should not join in higher education.
On the one hand , i am convinced that higher education is suitable for good students . Firstly , the learning at universities or colleges contains many difficulties which have many requirement for students . People who own high - quality would adapt and overcome this challenges , therefore , they could achieve many success. Secondly , overcoming the examination in order to join in universities or colleges is really a problem . Accordingly , students who own talent could achieve a good result and receive a slot at universities or college .
On the other hand , it is understandable why all of student should be participated in universities or colleges . On top of that , the specialise knowledge which is teached at universities or colleges have an important function to the development of people . In my opinion , people who contain the specialise knowledge could adapt for the high requirement and achieve a handsome salary . Furthermore , the environment of university provides for students skills which give people many assistance . To be honestly , I could learn about how to use computer or the ability of social communication at my university . Finally , Universities or colleges give students many relationships which support them to learn or work . As far as i know , the majority of people have many wonderful friends when they finish their learning .
In conclusion , there may be some reasons to support everyone participate and improve themselves at universities or colleges . I strongly believe that this policy is not without drawsbacks and thus should not be implemented by the state.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, honestly, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37543859649 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15017578058 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508771929825 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0210296663 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.133333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 46.0 5.01903807615 917% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299545687419 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114498339237 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081411258272 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19661012419 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196393731593 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.