These days , it is believed that communicate by speaking is more important than communicate by writing letter or message . Although , this idea is reasonable to some extent , i would argue that using written communication .
On the one hand , i am convinced that communicate by writing letter or message has some advantages . Firstly , content of conversation can be saved easily . In my opinion , the letter or message which is written on paper or smartphones may be saved for a long time . Accordingly , people could review their memory everytime . Secondly , people would not take many time to meet directly with each other . To be honestly , Going out to the coffee shop where people meet their friends could take many hours . Therefore , the majority of people don not want to meet friends because they are so tired after a busy day .
On the other hand , it is understandable why most people choose keep in touch by speaking . On top of that , i believed that meeting at the coffee shop where people could talk directly with each other is very happy . The conversation is more interesting because people have more opportunity to show their emotion . Furthermore , people would avoid disease about eyes which is caused by smartphones . Cellphones are abused could cause many consequences . For examples : Low vision or blindness . In addition to , reducing time on smartphones could help user avoid phones addiction .
In conclusion , there may be some reasons to support people keeping in touch by calls or meeting, i strongly believe that this policy is not without drawsbacks and thus should not be implemented by the state.
- Many young people today choose or are forced to go and work abroad What are the advantages disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country compared with living and working in your own country Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
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- Many young people today choose or are forced to go and work abroad What are the advantages disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country compared with living and working in your own country Discuss both views and give your own opinion 56
- Spoken communication is more powerful than written communication To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- The graph shows the Japanese average monthly salary Yen from 1953 to 1983 and the prices of black and white television and color television during the same period 79
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, firstly, furthermore, honestly, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09056603774 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80464306846 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562264150943 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.927592107 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3529411765 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5882352941 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8823529412 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 38.0 5.01903807615 757% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110459881841 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0388183035253 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749936941787 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968064952486 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129925198659 0.056905535591 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.