Some people believe that course of performing arts example Dance, music, drama, etc should be funded by government others believe that this should funded through other way example business, students family discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is good way to give sum into different represented field like arts, dance, music and so on and it is our culture and tradition. But other people perspective government should same funded in other ways business, students family, healthcare systems, etc. Therefore, I believe government should considerable both side. I fully explain both side with example in the following paragraph.
Analysing the statement and explaining further the first and foremost government should make dance classes, music classes and so on and should encourage to the children. So, children can be represented their hidden talent in front of public and I believe a lot of creativity and imagination involving into the arts. In addition, government should be take the arts to the international level. They take taxes from different things so they should involve amount into Dance, music and arts exhibition. For instance, Indians got talent is the best platform for these type of activity and government should be promote these show.
To contrary, government should be avils to other things for example they should provided basic items to the poor people and they should be give education, Healthcare amenities free of cost. Sometime, they should give money in a natural calamity. The strong example, Sonu Sood is real hero in the today's world because during corona pandemic a lot of workers was an employment at a time he was become aid to the needy person.
In final words, my opinion on par with that I believe that government should provide all the facility of learning arts and music as well as other things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04166666667 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6677828888 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9991931072 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.384615385 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383076168849 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137721956381 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0905952539234 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237630102052 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680522738933 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.