Some people believe that a crime is a result of social problems and poverty. Others
think that crime is a result of a bad person’s nature. Discuss both views and give opinion
It is clear that the crime rate is more and more younger. While some people think that a crime is a result of social problems and poverty, however, others argue that crime is a result of a bad person’s nature. This essay will present my opinion.
It is reasonable that social programs spawn crime. There are common problems such as political turmoil, economic downturn or lack of authority figures and security forces. IS Islamic gang demonstrates this view. They caused a series of bloody bombings in some countries and the recent event was in Sri Lanka led to the death toll at 290 and more than 500 injured in the April, 2019. Another event in Barcelona city, Spain with the death of 14 people and 80 people injured. That wakes the world up about the conflict among countries and religions. In addition, the poverty might cause crime, that is an understandable thing when the social gap is wide, human beings are not responsibility of a sufficient life, that boots them to break the law such as minor crimes such to shoplifting or pickpocketing or serious crimes such as robbery or murder. Commit crimes as a way of making a living.
On the other hand, crime is taken form from bad nature. Researchers have shown that aggressive or violent individuals have higher propotion to be a criminal. The lack of interest from parents or the lack of quality of education impacts to kids’ personality. A kid grows up in a family where a parent or both parents who is criminal is more promote to inherit negative characteristic. School bullying occurs frequently and complexly which promotes the government has to do something to prevent it.
In conclusion, I agree both views are reasons to shape crime.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 45, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'younger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: younger
...s clear that the crime rate is more and more younger. While some people think that a crime i...
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Line 2, column 370, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'April 2019'.
Suggestion: April 2019
...at 290 and more than 500 injured in the April, 2019. Another event in Barcelona city, Spain...
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Line 2, column 750, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...that boots them to break the law such as minor crimes such to shoplifting or pick...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while, as to, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8231292517 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73908166623 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608843537415 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 63.6486354051 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4117647059 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2941176471 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365237526153 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098784812354 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136615290503 0.0667982634062 205% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231802450716 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.152701048484 0.056905535591 268% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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