The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999

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The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999

The given chart below indicates variations in the percentage of joblessness in the US and Japan from March 1993 to March 1999.
Looking at the graph, the unemployment rate in the US reduced while the contrast was true for Japan over the whole period surveyed.
In 1993, there was a contrast pattern in the figure of people being out - of - work both in the US and Japan, with the former reaching a peak of 7.0 % and the later hit the lowest point of 2.5 %.
In the remaining years, the number of unemployed people was witnessed to drop erratically from 7.0 % to 5.0 % in 1996 before going up and down around 5.0 % till 1999. Meanwhile, the proportion in Japan, which rocketed by twofold in 1996 compared to 1993. Subsequently, the figure kept growing dramatically at 5.0 % in the last year.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'charts'.
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...people being out - of - work both in the US and Japan, with the former reaching a...
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...with the former reaching a peak of 7.0 % and the later hit the lowest point of 2....
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Line 4, column 70, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...umber of unemployed people was witnessed to drop erratically from 7.0 % to 5.0 % ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 647.0 965.302439024 67% => OK
No of words: 139.0 196.424390244 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65467625899 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43363162301 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60806070792 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618705035971 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 179.1 283.868780488 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8903993244 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.833333333 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.83333333333 5.23603664747 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357023573511 0.215688989381 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149343151082 0.103423049105 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139526520893 0.0843802449381 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206880629581 0.15604864568 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136657175595 0.0819641961636 167% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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