Some people believe that crime is a result of social problems and poverty, others think that crime is a result of bad person’s nature. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is universally accepted that crime is a misdeed and it makes people offensive in certain ways. Many support the view that people often do illegal acts because of the adversity in society while some believe that they are criminals by their nature. From my perspective, I believe that deprivation is the real cause of crime since everybody is concerned about their families and their living. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument.
In this age and era, it is true that life is being an injustice to a myriad of people owing to high competition in the societies. Those people who are working hard in their lives but have no connections are paid less as compared to those who have links in the high authorities. This leads to crime when an individual compares himself to the other person. One prominent example is the working labor, who work so hard day and night without taking any day off and earns lower than a person who sits on a chair for a few hours and getting highly paid. Eventually, This is where an individual ignores the law and act in an illegal manner.
On the other hand, some people believe that crime is not accepted at any cost since it is an unlawful act. They opine that criminals have chosen their path because that is in their blood. Most criminals do crime because they love to show their dominance on other people who helps them in many ways. To illustrate this, recent research of the United States declares that almost half of the criminals in the central jail of America have done crime because they want to get fame by being superior to others.
To recapitulate, many people think that criminals do crime because it is the part of their nature, I strongly support the view that it is the cause of indigence and penury which makes it difficult for them to survive in a society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 218, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...s but have no connections are paid less as compared to those who have links in the...
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Line 5, column 613, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an illegal manner" with adverb for "illegal"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...e an individual ignores the law and act in an illegal manner. On the other hand, some people b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60550458716 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38555632809 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510703363914 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.755164611 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.571428571 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3571428571 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190936223307 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762445996787 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577557807772 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131060613475 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465872569945 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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