Artificial Intelligence has been one of the most controversial domains of inquiry in computer science since it was first proposed in 1950s. In my opinion, despite having some negative aspects, artificial intelligence will affect our lives in a positive way.
On the one hand, the advanced intelligence technology are now capable enough to reduce human efforts in numerous areas. To conduct different operations in the industry, many of them are using AI to create machines that perform tasks with higher level of accuracy or calculation using large amount of data. For example. autonomous robots are being developed to carry out surgical procedures with greater precision than human doctors. Such technology could improve the safety by reducing the risks of human errors in every fields. Thus, it is easy to imagine how this development and many others will steadily improve the quality of our lives.
On the other hand, I share the concerns of people who believe that artificial intelligence may harm us if we are not ready for its development. The relationship between automation and employment has always been complicated. While the previous waves of automation eliminated blue-collar jobs and create more middle-class jobs through macro economic and micro economic effects, new jobs which are created by the improvement of AI may be not accessible to people with average capability leading to employment crisis. Furthermore, despite the government’s ability of providing living materials for their citizens, the unemployment of the majority of people has detrimental impacts on community especially society degradation.
By way of conclusion, although artificial intelligence remains some potential dangers to society, I am of the opinion that advanced intelligence would make further contribution to the development of community in the long-term.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The article is probably missing here: 'in the 1950s'.
Suggestion: in the 1950s
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Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...cial intelligence will affect our lives in a positive way. On the one hand, the advanced intel...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Autonomous
...sing large amount of data. For example. autonomous robots are being developed to carry out...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, thus, while, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57746478873 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11672829086 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637323943662 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.7218904342 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.0 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287949171957 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875882308208 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788578121967 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165303876037 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644215421336 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.