Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future. Others, by contrast, are worried that we are not prepared for a world in which computers are more intelligent than humans. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People are either excited or worried about the future efffects of artificial intelligence. From my perspective, i dunderstand two opposing views and i am also both fanscinated by the increase of advance intelligence that was created by human and apprehensive about negative consequences that it brings to us.
On the one hand, the increasing intellignece has delivered tons of benefits. Machines and softwares computers are likely to applied in working conditions on account of the precision and flexibility. In other words, robots and modern machines absolutely can replace mandkind’s job like caculating amounts of data or carrying out surgical procedures with high level of accuracy. Some brans that make self-driving cars such as Tesla, Google or Mecedez-Ben periodically accomplish their ambition to enlarge the quality of sensors and cameras. Besides that, improving safety is also another advantage of AI. Evryone fell less stess and anxious whilst working with modern machines since they were invented to reduce the likelihood of human errors. As a result, aritificial intelligence have enrichened our quality of lives.
On the other hand, i share the concerns of people who think that AI do harm in manifold facets. In the short term, workers and the graduates have difficulties in working environment. They have to try a lot to not be unemployed. The reasons for this scenario is that advances systems on computers have captured many jobs. For example, delf-driving vehicles cause redundancies in driving jobs, so taxi drivers, bus drivers or public vehicles lose their jobs. In the medium term, human will be deskilled and have ambigous objectives in their lives. Consider of a long term fear, robots are smart that they will no longer do whatever we want and they may make decisions which are harmful for our welfare.
On balance, AI have enhanced our lives but it also have had a tendency to threat human;s world. In my view, i personally believe that every one should embrace its advantage sand strive to avoid prospetiverisks as much as possible by not always exploting artifical intelligence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, so, for example, such as, as a result, in my view, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1777.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2418879056 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94584683783 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637168141593 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8306059795 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7222222222 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27777777778 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197974693816 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540778434061 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493110167873 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103466323309 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238154412913 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.