Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a c on our lives in the near future. Others, by contrast, are worried that we are not prepared for a world in which computers are more intelligent than humans. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Due to the development of the technology in modern world, everything seems to be so fast with just a blink of an eye, the field of Artificial intelligence has been so powerful, which raised two current of ideals about these 2 most important side - humanism and scientism. While there’re people who believing in the future with the modern easy life, the others seem to being anxious about the world where people will be a slave of the high-tech intelligence. These both belief is forceful by itself here is the reason why.
In one hand, the scientism believes in the advantages that AI will bring to people. People thought that with the born of AI, they could finally reduce the workers and to optimize the production. With machine work continuously, people could increase the products without have to minimize the product’s quality. Moreover, in some dangerous situations, which need to be careful, the modern intelligence could easily solve the problems with theirs latest part. For example, many developed country has use their high-tech robot to do important surgery. And the industry using the robot to maximize their profit. The state-of-art technology can also help people to be more creative. The artificial intelligence will replace people to take responsibility of jobs in order to create a blank of time for people to rest, focus on themselves and help them concentrate on develop their creative brain.
In the other hand, the develop of AI has become a threat to people believed that the modern machine will take over the control and start to make their own decisions, sooner we will be replaced. With the development of Ai, the humanism was highly featured because many arts which had been done by the artificial intelligence were meaningless but still got the compliment form social. Sooner all the arts will lost its meaning, people, who actual cares will be contemptuous. Moreover, when the field of artificial intelligence became more and more powerful, one day we will be replace, this will pose a serious threat to workers especially labors, they could be easily replaced by a tons of robot which will lead to the massive unemployed crisis which will make the country has to face more and more problems about accommodations and hunger.
In shorts, each faces have its point to prove the impact of the artificial intelligence on people live and also the country with its profit. But in my opinion the artificial intelligence can bring a threat if people don’t know how to use it right and overuse it. Although the artificial intelligence have its advantages and disadvantages people should make a full use of it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Suggestion: lose
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a ton' or simply 'tons'?
Suggestion: a ton; tons
...abors, they could be easily replaced by a tons of robot which will lead to the massive...
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Message: Did you mean 'rights'?
Suggestion: rights
...reat if people don’t know how to use it right and overuse it. Although the artificial...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, moreover, so, still, while, as to, for example, in short, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2197.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 441.0 315.596192385 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98185941043 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76622456086 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501133786848 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 687.6 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.7916059136 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.055555556 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27777777778 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325896206693 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09634233325 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05820813989 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198691134365 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322834792851 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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