Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots.
What is your opinion?
These days, man force is step by step going down, and artificial thinking robots are taking their place. I wonder if the jobs where humans are most essential will be taken over by robots but, a few unskilled jobs might go down to them. This essay will discuss why robots will not completely dominate the job market over the coming years.
In the future, robots may land up having all the jobs where logical thinking and human skills are not necessary. Companies will prefer robots to humans because they can save money and training time that they should invest in an employee to get the job done. For example, in many restaurants all over the world, the waiters have been replaced by robots. Moreover, many employees who work in ticket counters have been replaced by automated machines, which costs less compared to employee pay. For these reasons, the jobs where less human knowledge is required are taken by artificial robots.
However, there are a few jobs that can not be replaced by robots because they do not have proper skills and can not think logically. In short, the jobs where the human touch is required can not be replaced by a robot. For instance, jobs such as psychology, teaching, medicine, and social work will never be taken by machines. They can not reach the same height as humankind even hundreds of thousands of years.
In conclusion, there are few significant numbers of jobs which will be done by robots in the future. Low-skill jobs will be done by artificial robots. But, jobs, where human presence and touch are required, will always exist for humans. Overall, with the growing number of artificial intelligence robots, there will be few jobs that will remain for humans.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82935153584 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34475709249 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505119453925 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.4227453557 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.4375 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3125 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296211685631 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121128490625 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841358598169 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20224137113 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681531401334 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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