some people believe that eventually all the jobs will be replaced by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinion?
Rapid growth of artificial intelligence throughout the world is quite impressive and it seems like AI robots are going to replace human jobs very soon. however, some jobs will always require human intervention in them. This essay will discuss why AI can't take over human jobs completely.
with the recent development in technology and specifically in AI, everything which involves manual efforts are moving towards automation. Regressive jobs which do not require human brain, calculations and analyses are easily replaceable by robots. Managers would prefare to train a model one time instead of hiring people, polish their skills and go through a number of steps. Some of the key examples for this would be chat bots trained for customer support services and robots used in restaurants for catering services. These type of jobs doesn't require any science and complex strategies, its involves one time training and repetition of same work everyday.
Although Robots are beneficial for replacing the boring and repetitive work, there are a lot of jobs which are impossible without humans. Activities that involve human brain, senses and observatory analysis can not be done by a robot through training. One of the example for the above would be in the field of medicine. Diagnoses of illness cannot be determine via any algorithm or programming, instead it requires human touch and skills to figure out and treat the illness.
To conclude, it is most likely that machine will replace most of the jobs but there will always be scope for complicated job which requires human-specific abilities and they can never be replaced.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2319391635 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73129280504 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615969581749 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0713369555 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.846153846 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.53846153846 7.06120827912 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200791737538 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745244312333 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579152805488 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139133384703 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523020320687 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.