some people believe every information should be shared in relation to research, business and others while others believe not every information should be shared. Discuss both views and give your opinion
There are diverse opinions among intellectuals on whether informations should be disclosed to the general public. While some believe that disclosing such information are quite good, others claimed that ideas are precious and should not be shared because it helps to keep others informed and also clears doubt.
On the one hand, opponent of the view that information should be dispersed claimed that such details are costly to acquire and perhaps should not be disclosed freely. This means that this information requires much money to be acquired and ought not to be dessimintated to freely. Another possible reason is that it might not be appreciated by the public. This means that it's easy access might affect the possibility of being taken seriously. For example, most online articles on strategies on Business growth are often disregarded by enterprenuer, and this is probably because they do not take such works seriously.
On the other hand, supporters of this group, which I have similar view with argue that such ideas helps to keep the public informed. If individuals are equipped with the necessary information, it helps them to keep abreast with facts they ought to know. For instance, student researchers uses qualitative method of data collection, which they learnt it's the best form of collecting data. This could not have been possible if the students were not taught. Furthermore, it helps to clear unnecessary assumptions. That is to say that individual are well clarified when the receive proper information.
In conclusion, there are wide range of opinion on sharing of facts to the public, I agree with the school of thought that encourages the disperse of information because it helps to resolve assumption and also equips individual with the required details.
- Some people think that young people should go to university to further their education while others think they should be encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders etc to serve society Discuss both views and give your own opinion 67
- Central and local governments make a frantic attempt to promote festivals to create a lot of revenue Some people think this money should be invested in social programmes for the poor To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 67
- Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research business and the scientific world Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely Discuss both views and give you 73
- Global environment issues are the responsibility of richer nations not the poorer ones To what extend do you agree or disagree 61
- The use of violence in music lyrics video games and films seen by children is causing concern in many societies What problems may be caused by this type of violent imagery and what steps could be taken to lessen the impact on young people 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21527777778 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78595151587 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545138888889 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1491931707 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.285714286 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279013382854 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899060345346 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110444409495 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180131142505 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145585340931 0.056905535591 256% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.