Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
society as a whole. While I agree that everyone has the right to access college education, I do not believe that governments should therefore make it free for all students.
On the one hand, the idea of tuition-free university education is attractive for various reasons. Students from lower socioeconomic backgrounds can have a chance to pursue higher education without having to pay huge sums of money for it. On an individual level, this may ensure every student, especially those from poor families, holds a graduate degree, which would improve their future job prospects and standard of living, while at the same time lowering poverty rates. From a societal perspective, societies can enjoy higher tax revenues due to increased employment rates, and a high level of civilised citizens who are less likely to commit crime.
Despite these arguments above, I believe that governments should not allow everyone to access college education for free. The main issue is that this would put a strain on state funding since the governments would have to cover all the tuition fees which could be better on other public sectors, such as healthcare, national securities and transportation. Secondly, because many students want to go to work right after high school to lead an independent life rather than continue their studies, offering free college education can be seen as a waste of money. Finally, if students knew they had to pay nothing to retake a subject, they would have less motivation to study hard and therefore pay less attention to their academic results.
In conclusion, it seems to me that governments should not offer free college education, and I prefer the current system where students have to pay tuition fees to attend university.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Society
society as a whole. While I agree that everyone...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14335664336 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74056515059 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625874125874 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.9443267879 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.727272727 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29599425433 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11553500133 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102877570475 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197002361951 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790253203738 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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