Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The subject of pursuing higher education is a widely discussed topic around the world.. These days, many people hold schools of thought about whether tertiary education fees should be covered by governments without considering the financial status of students. While there are reasonable arguments to support free university tuition, I strongly believe that counter-arguments should be considered.
There are many reasons why university tuition fees should be abolished. First of all, it is advantageous to students, especially students who come from low-income backgrounds or face financial difficulties because they will probably have more opportunities to upgrade their knowledge and find jobs so that they can earn money by themselves to better their own living conditions. Additionally, if everyone can be entitled to university, there will be more educated workforce with high skills, resulting in not only a prosperous economy but also a civilized society.
In spite of the mentioned benefits, the downsides of pursuing university without tuition fees also need to be considered. On the individual level, it has negative impacts on bachelor’s degree holders. In particular, the number of laborers may rise considerably if there are more and more university graduates. As a result, more graduated students will be probably unemployed although they have university degrees. Furthermore, on the social level, the free-college policy can put a strain on the state budget, which can lead to the increase in taxes and the decrease in welfare and many other disadvantages.
To conclude, although offering free education may have numerous advantages, I firmly believe that governments should not exempt everyone from paying tuition fees..
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...exempt everyone from paying tuition fees..
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, while, in particular, as a result, first of all, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63498098859 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10945725627 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615969581749 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0570178489 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.5 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208438588376 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719276708679 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057210436951 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138500495315 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380990130167 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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