It is widely argued that national authorities have a responsibility to implement tuition waives for students irrespective of socio-economic because everyone has entitled to attend higher education. While this perception is justifiable, I believe that the tuition exemption policy could be fraught with pitfalls.
On the one hand, governmental bodies should provide a free-fee policy for students due to a myriad of worthy benefits. First and foremost, employment could stand greater to get a high-paid job. This is because nowadays employers in major firms require a bachelor’s degree as the foremost qualification, so students can successfully apply. Furthermore, this tendency could improve the workforce. Employees are equipped and cultivated relative skills to improve the business’s performance which could act as a precursor to not only a thriving economy but also a civilized society.
On the other hand, notwithstanding the aforementioned advantages, there are a host of compelling reasons as to why I am convinced that tuition exemption could have an adverse bearing on both individuals and communities. One rationale is that students would not have the motivation to study. For example, they could miss class and don’t put effort to study since failing does not cost, thereby taking a toll on study performance. Another justification is that the enormous cost incurred to abolish tuition fees can put a strain on government coffers. Therefore, it could lead to budget deficits, taxes hikes, or reduced social welfare thereby ordinary people, especially the underprivileged could struggle even more to make ends meet.
In conclusion, it is undeniable of this policy, I would contend that government should not cover fees for all individuals attributable to some repercussions.
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'hosts'?
Suggestion: hosts
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Suggestion: to even
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6043956044 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2656946226 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641025641026 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3301880761 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.692307692 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140210804404 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475594189386 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448623113996 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0898882917732 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263312211926 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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