In this day and age, a number of students who have already graduated from high school tend to go the universities to continue the curriculum. For this reason, some people believe that governments should come up with a solution so that every university does not charge tuition fees. In my view, this opinion has many advantages but the disadvantages caused by it are not small, so I do not completely agree because of some reasons that I will mention in this essay.
First and foremost, an exemption to tuition fees means that people from lower socioeconomic backgrounds can have a chance to pursue higher education. For example, students who come from slums or their family finances are not enough for them to study, so this is the best opportunity to help them have a bright future with stable work. Besides, at the state level, society will benefit from a high level of civilized citizens.
Furthermore, when that policy was conducted, the crime rate can reduce significantly as people can distinguish between right and wrong. Meanwhile, every people will have a good education so their behaviour can be controlled and they will know what is true or what is false. As a result, this will make our society more effective and develop plenty of country in all over the world.
However, there are some drawbacks that everyone has to notice. First, this practice may create a hyper-competitive labour market because everyone is educated so the rate of unemployed will increase markedly. Moreover, students may not pay attention to academic results and study due to the fact that it will cost them nothing to retake a subject. This will make some people underestimate the curriculum and not care too much about their work in the future.
As shown above, any policy given by governments must be considered extremely carefully because this will affect every individual and the development of countries For me, I hope the fees of every university will be declined moderately so that it does not put a strain on the state treasury and ensure the right for everyone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hermore, when that policy was conducted, the crime rate can reduce significantly ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, as to, for example, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91404011461 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73333212518 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570200573066 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2374187166 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.5 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9285714286 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22834570594 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775704403081 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496279537626 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121002516066 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403040830867 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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