Some people believe that everyone has the right to receive university education, so the government should make it free to all people regardless of their financial background. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
University has been a fundamental foundation of many successful careers. However, not every person has the opportunity to approach this level of education. Some argue that the authority should deliver such educational courses free of charge to all people nationwide because each individual claims equal right to attain university knowledge. In my point of view, governments should not make this high-level education free because university possesses several unique qualities and special requirements.
To begin with, people indeed have equal rights to participate in the universities despite the fact that many students may become a consuming source of financial aid. Nevertheless, whether people come from low-income families or wealthy ones, they should be welcomed to experience the university environment when they select this academic path for their future. Having said that, both the rich and poor should be receiving university education without any restriction. Furthermore, to emphasize the value of equal rights, the authorities have to provide university study to all citizens even when they have to give out more scholarships to support the in-need students.
Unfortunately, students cannot demand free university tuitions because of two reasons. The first option to fully support academic learners is to invest more national revenues in the institutes. While this might seem reasonable due to a huge amount of tax residents already pay, the unstoppably enormous increase of in-need students in the society makes it an impossible task for the governments. The second solution is to reduce the cost of education itself, which is another hard-to-carry-out measurement. Since lecturers and assistants spend significant efforts to produce lessons, they will not be productive any longer after their salaries being cut down.
In conclusion, while people have the entitlement to enroll in university, I believe governments do not have to fully support each and every person with his financial condition.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, while, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66336633663 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02961668593 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633663366337 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2273734161 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.571428571 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237655692884 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718072159889 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582523443974 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139645816062 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601502044236 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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