Some people believe that everyone should pay for their own health-care in society instead of relying on the government. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people argue that it is individual rather than the government should be responsible for their health-care. I am completely disagree with the idea and the government is obliged to citizens’ health-care system.
People who think that individuals should pay health-care themselves may consider their countries financial situation. In recent years, the sluggish global economy results in the sharp drop of tax revenue in many regions. They assert that the limited financial budget should be invested in more urgent domains, such as infrastructure construction or solving poverty in remote areas. Besides, they think that individuals should be responsible for the health condition of themselves. Therefore, those costs should not be charged by the governments.
However, as an essential consistent of social security system, health-care is one of the most fundamental welfare in any normal countries. The governments should firstly guarantee their taxpayers’ well-being and basic medicine insurance. Otherwise the social stability will be negatively influenced. Take the former USSR as a typical instance, whose disintegration could be mainly attributed to the collapse of social securities.
Another important fact should be noticed is that nowadays some medicines and therapeutic processes are too expensive due to their sky-high developing costs. For example, a bottle of anti-cancer medicine could even cost over 5,000 dollars and taking this medicine chronically will undoubtedly exhaust the patient’s family. If the medicine could be covered by the health-care system, it will to great extent alleviate the patient’s financial situation.
In conclusion, while it will hugely cost tax revenue of the government, it is essential for them to be responsible for people’s health-care charge.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 129, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disagreed'.
Suggestion: disagreed
... for their health-care. I am completely disagree with the idea and the government is obl...
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Line 9, column 244, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Otherwise,
...ell-being and basic medicine insurance. Otherwise the social stability will be negatively...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.92105263158 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26714008083 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612781954887 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.511831993 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222952965085 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833889120214 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755612583664 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144797617527 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632634488282 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.76 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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