As well as making money, businesses should also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?
Making profits is recognised as the intrinsic character of enterprises in modern society. However, some people argue that enterprises have social obligation as well. In my opinion, corporations should not solely concentrate on making money, and tackling socio-economic problems is also important.
It is understandable that most corporations take making profits as their primary task. This is mainly because business organisations should ensure their survival in the fierce competition of the market. They have to continually produce fortune for the sake of maintaining the operation, covering the huge overheads, as well as paying those employees. Otherwise, it will be confronted with bankruptcy, which seems impossible for them making social contribution. Besides, the investment in developing and innovation of corporations is enormous, which is mainly driven by financial factors. Without making profits, it will be difficult for companies to solve societal problems in the long run.
On the other hand, it is also reasonable for companies to shoulder more social responsibilities instead of making money only. Firstly, in order to repay the society, companies should spare no efforts to improve the quality of service and products they offer, which is an essential requirement of social responsibility. Furthermore, making social contributions will to great extent boost companies’ reputation and enlarge their influence, which is beneficial for them making more profits in return. Taking Unilever, a world famous multinational corporation as an example, the company has had a profound record of giving medical or financial aid to the most deprived people of developing countries. Finally, those practices will also alleviate governments’ financial stress, making them have more money to invest in improving infrastructure construction, educational and health-care standard, etc. All of those actions will eventually benefit the society.
In conclusion, companies should fulfil social responsibilities as well as meet their financial objectives. Both of them will benefit the society and the companies themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, well, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1838.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.92903225806 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3384540965 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570967741935 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9272383683 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.117647059 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2352941176 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23529411765 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242513642269 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785810834786 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600944831713 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16068997987 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503784705163 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.11 12.4159519038 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.