Some people believe that good teamwork is what makes companies successful. Others feel that it is more important to have a good leader. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There is an ongoing debate about different factors that contribute to the success of one company. Some claim that good collaboration among team members is the pinnacle, others argue that leadership is the overriding factor that will determine the final result. From my perspective, the company’s accomplishment stems from both the team spirit and the talented leader with some reasons outlined below.
To embark on, it is undeniable that in the formula of success, there is absolutely a presence of teamwork. Good teamwork means they are already half through to the success path. When consummate employees are allowed to work together, the productivity and the chances of success are boosted to the highest level, that is not to mention the faster speed of the progress. In addition, the tasks involved in a particular project are too enormous and tough to be done by one individual. Therefore, if it is divided equally to each member, it will not put too many responsibilities on one shoulder and it will also be accomplished on time.
However, the progress of the team will just get nowhere if there is no guidance from the leader. Leaders absolutely play an integral role in contributing to a team by virtue of their mission. In detail, the workplace is often fraught with problems and arguments among colleagues so a leader is needed to connect every member of the team together, making them feel they are all appreciated and of course, ensuring the progress of the whole team. The quintessence can be observed in famous conglomerates in the world where with the support of skillful leaders such as Steve Jobs or Jeff Bezos, the beginning of their company which was initially a small factory have become a multibillion empire.
In conclusion, excellent teamwork and a talented leader are in an inextricable relationship that will determine the triumph of the company through their own ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09523809524 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89934267665 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.645007538 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.461538462 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2307692308 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179852037546 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605460700479 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450728669903 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103852501772 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279959116156 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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