Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society.
Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give your opinion.
There are lots of divergent opinions about whether death penalty is indispensable to guarantee the organized discipline of the national law and people ‘s life or should the punishment like this be eradicated out of the society due to its brutality. Generally speaking, while death penalty is applied only for callous criminals, it still has some drawbacks that is needed to be pondered before it is sentenced.
It is widely known that death penalty is the harshest punishment which completely wipes the hazardous criminals out of the society. With capital punishment being sentenced, the lawbreaker has zero chances of escaping to create threats or worries to people. Furthermore, it is the most suitable punishment for those who committed nefarious crimes such as serial murder or statutory rape. Besides, it will be a tangible warning for the other people who intend to commit such crimes to mess up the organization of the government. For instance, we all have seen a lot of cases whose culprit killed all the family members or used the gun to shot the whole school just for some simple reasons. As a result, they received the death penalty but the agony and obsession they left for the victims would be everlasting so sometimes, even death penalty is not enough to punish these criminals.
On the other side of a lawsuit, there are some hidden factors that lead the perpetrator to commit the crime apart from the inhuman reasons. In most today cases, the culprits are often diagnosed with mental disorders or they have suffered from a wretched childhood without the care and love of their families so they grow up with the deficiency in the good characteristics so the leniency from the society is needed to give them a second chance to fix the mistake, especially for the juvenile delinquent who hasn’t been responsible for the reckless actions yet. Furthermore, a death penalty can cause a wrong judgement in court. Taking this cause célèbre as an example, a young boy named George Stinney was wrongly convicted with a death penalty for murdering two girls but actually it turned out that Stinney was not a culprit but they forced to let him pay by his entire life. This evidently proves the drawback in the capital punishment.
In conclusion, even though capital punishment isn’t applied for all the crimes, it should be removed due to the inhumanity it has
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, but, furthermore, if, second, so, still, while, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1976.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 400.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69617785022 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 617.4 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.079046131 49.4020404114 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.142857143 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5714285714 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340444103144 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116678800323 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519302713245 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196138954206 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842753010764 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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