Some people believe that the government should make laws regarding nutrition and healthy lifestyle, while others think that it is a matter of personal responsibility. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, people have awareness to take possible steps to live healthy lifestyle. Some masses ponder that the authority should make rules and regulation regarding healthy lifestyle, whereas others opine that it is a individual responsibility to take care own self. It is highly debatable issue, therefore, before commenting my opinion, both the views are discussed in ensuing paragraphs.
On the one side, the most obvious reason is that, in today's fast and forward lifestyle, people access more amount of junk food, as a result, it creates many diseases in long term. Therefore, government should take a possible steps to control it. For example, authority could increase the tax on those food, which are unhygienic, like pizza and burger. Another important reason is that, by accessing more amount of unhealthy food, it affects on overall economy of the country. To elaborate, those unhealthy food create many health related problems, and to curb all these problem regime have to send handsome amount of money on medical sectors, like built more hospitals, medicines and many others. So government should make laws regarding healthy lifestyle for batter world.
On the other hand, it is also true that, it is a matter of personal choice. The first reason is that, all people have different taste, therefore, it id difficult to which food will be banned or which not. The studies research that, taste is a number one factor while eating. In addition to this, nowadays, people are more conscious about their life style. In today's modern era, there are many ways available to stay fit. For instance, by doing yoga, join gym as well as go out for walking very helpful for stay fit and healthy, although eating more fast food.
In conclusion, I believe that, it is not only responsibility of individual but also government should take some effective steps to promote citizen towards the healthy lifestyle by making rules and regulations.
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Message: Did you mean 'this food' or 'those foods'?
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun health seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much health', 'a good deal of health'.
Suggestion: much health; a good deal of health
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1320754717 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60151665927 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588050314465 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1336713306 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4375 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230079333298 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745959471986 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755459211424 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149512065756 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773331762352 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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