Changing lifestyle to promote healthy living has become a slogan among people of all age. Though anyone can change their food habit and take care of their health, a group of people expect that the government shall enforce regulations to standardize the nutritious food and healthy lifestyle. In this essay, both the views will be discussed, followed by my personal opinion.
Enforcing laws on foods and lifestyle will improve over-all healthcare facility in two steps. Firstly, If the government successfully enforces the law to consume the proper food and perform recommended exercises, there will be less people suffering from malnutrition, high blood-pressure and diabetes. As a result, a state has to take care of less patients. Secondly, with the reduced number of ill-people, the healthcare system can properly focus on the affected and ensure the best medical treatment. During Covid-19 pandemic, for instance, most of the countries had to deal with a large number of infected people, which drastically reduced their capacity to deal with other dieses. Regulating food habit and standardizing exercises for mass people will increase a country’s ability to deliver better medical treatment.
On the other hand, some will disagree on enforcing law to control personal lifestyle and food habit. Therefore, this is not completely possible to monitor what a man eats and whether he performs recommended exercises in schedule. As this is not currently feasible to ensure the enforcement of lifestyle framing law, making people aware of the benefits of eating healthy and practicing healthy work-outs can make a difference.
In my opinion, both the approaches has the same destination, to ensure healthy living. Though this is not appropriate to control food habit and exercise schedule of anyone, raising public awareness regarding nutritious food and beneficial exercises will work to serve the purpose.
To conclude, enforcing healthcare law can help the government reduce patients’ numbers. Similarly, increasing public awareness will promote everyone to eat healthy as well as live healthy. As laws can never stop everyone from unhealthy practices, raising awareness among the communities is the key to solve the problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 357, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
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Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...rm recommended exercises, there will be less people suffering from malnutrition, hig...
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Line 3, column 344, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun patients is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...s a result, a state has to take care of less patients. Secondly, with the reduced nu...
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Line 3, column 583, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... most of the countries had to deal with a large number of infected people, which drastically redu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, well, as to, for instance, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1901.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51014492754 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90608585793 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547826086957 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6031024548 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.823529412 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2941176471 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35294117647 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190119046373 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666317037622 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583380477146 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11484227734 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548219416359 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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