Some people believe that government should make laws regarding nutrition and healthy lifestyle, while other think that it is is a rational of personal choice and personal responsibility. Discuss both of view and give your opinion.
When question is regarding adopt a healthy lifestyle some proponents suggest that government have to take some steps about it. Contemporary, other side that it is a matter of choice in the ensuring paragraph I will discuss both of the views and offer my position.
Discussing the views of people, who are the considerable that it is government's responsibility. The first and foremost point is that, if every person of our country has strong immunity system then it directly affect to many factors, such as, productivity, working hours and decrease a group of desease ratio, which can directly affected to Nation's GDP. To illustrate, it has been observed that in the current covid-19 pandemic situation our nation has suffered a lot and also suffering right now because of the low immunity system of mankind. To align with abow to over crime that type of disease government should organise some campaign, awareness program, similarly as well as some digital advertisement to spread it. Moreover, if they impose some strict norms than 50% of people will automatically follow it and take it as a mendatory. Such as when government was libral about a helmet the accident ratio was too much high but after 1000 rs as a punishment it decreased.
Focusing on the others view points about personal choice, to begin with, people are more conscious about their health rather than past. To exemplify, vegan and gtaten free food are on trend, people choose to do exercise, yoga and walking, however; some are lazy and have a poor habit of consuming food they are suffer from diabetes and obesity,thus, they suffered from stress, depression and many other and ailment.
To sum up and offer my position, I would say that both have to contribute together and build a healthy nation because health is wealth.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When question is regarding adopt a healthy l...
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Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... that government have to take some steps about it. Contemporary, other side that ...
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Line 3, column 44, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cussing the views of people, who are the considerable that it is governments resp...
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Line 3, column 211, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'affects'?
Suggestion: affects
...strong immunity system then it directly affect to many factors, such as, productivity,...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 566, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...system of mankind. To align with abow to over crime that type of disease governme...
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Line 5, column 312, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'suffered'.
Suggestion: suffered
...a poor habit of consuming food they are suffer from diabetes and obesity,thus, they su...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 344, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , thus
...hey are suffer from diabetes and obesity,thus, they suffered from stress, depression ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 393, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun other seems to be countable; consider using: 'many others'.
Suggestion: many others
...ey suffered from stress, depression and many other and ailment. To sum up and offer my ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, similarly, so, then, thus, well, as to, such as, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96688741722 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72248264609 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612582781457 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.525587877 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.363636364 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4545454545 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4545454545 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214320636447 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784638736933 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527383271866 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126175623906 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672395796511 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When question is regarding adopt a healthy l...
^^^^
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... that government have to take some steps about it. Contemporary, other side that ...
^^
Line 3, column 44, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cussing the views of people, who are the considerable that it is governments resp...
^^
Line 3, column 211, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'affects'?
Suggestion: affects
...strong immunity system then it directly affect to many factors, such as, productivity,...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 566, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...system of mankind. To align with abow to over crime that type of disease governme...
^^
Line 5, column 312, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'suffered'.
Suggestion: suffered
...a poor habit of consuming food they are suffer from diabetes and obesity,thus, they su...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 344, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , thus
...hey are suffer from diabetes and obesity,thus, they suffered from stress, depression ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 393, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun other seems to be countable; consider using: 'many others'.
Suggestion: many others
...ey suffered from stress, depression and many other and ailment. To sum up and offer my ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, similarly, so, then, thus, well, as to, such as, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96688741722 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72248264609 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612582781457 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.525587877 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.363636364 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4545454545 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4545454545 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214320636447 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784638736933 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527383271866 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126175623906 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672395796511 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.