The ever- increasing problem of traffic - congestion has become a great nuisance for authorities to overcome. Some have the opinion that by constructing more number of motorways and train ways, this issue can be tackled as traffic will be diverted to different paths. Others have the viewpoint of widening the existing roads so that traffic can be managed more efficiently.
Considering the former option of spreading new pathways, it will definitely assist in lowering the number of vehicles on a single lane by providing more options to the masses to reach at their destinations. A great network of roadways also symbolizes the development of a city. However, it will need governments to invest large chunk of budget on such huge projects and reserve more land to build roads.
Moving to the latter option, some opine that it would be difficult to find more and more land space for building new roads and construction in itself, is a cumbersome task. So, it would be better to resize the pathways which already circulate around the city or connect cities. It would largely save funds as well as labour to be involved in making new roads and these resources can be used in other projects initiated by the governments.
In my perspective, enlarging the existing roads would be more economical option if there is no major inconvenience involved in the process for common people. Moreover, I think a middle approach should be adopted, likewise, constructing flyovers over the roads which will solve the traffic problem to great extent.
In conclusion, governments should ask for public opinion and take any step of modifying the road system after having a favorable consent from majority of the common people. Besides this, these projects should be planned by considering long - term benefits in the future.
- Tourism is becoming increasingly important as a source of revenue to many countries but its disadvantages should not be overlooked 78
- Write a letter to your friend inviting him her to your family party In your letter Explain why you are organizing the party Describe what you are planning to do Say how important it is to have your friend at the party 78
- International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places At the same time there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages 78
- Is freedom of speech necessary in a free society?Give reasons for your answer.Write at least 250 words.(Question from: http://www.ielts-exam.net/ielts_writing_samples_task_2/728/) 11
- Some people believe that it is valuable to do experiments with viruses and bacteria however others think that it is dangerous so should not be done To which statement do you agree 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, likewise, moreover, so, well, i think, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10738255034 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77487937676 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58389261745 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2148726393 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.076923077 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156834103759 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589214783935 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039374778151 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887535182176 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296734717774 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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