The ever- increasing problem of traffic - congestion has become a great nuisance for authorities to overcome. Some have the opinion that by constructing more number of motorways and train ways, this issue can be tackled as traffic will be diverted to different paths. Others have the viewpoint of widening the existing roads so that traffic can be managed more efficiently.
Considering the former option of spreading new pathways, it will definitely assist in lowering the number of vehicles on a single lane by providing more options to the masses to reach at their destinations. A great network of roadways also symbolizes the development of a city. However, it will need governments to invest large chunk of budget on such huge projects and reserve more land to build roads.
Moving to the latter option, some opine that it would be difficult to find more and more land space for building new roads and construction in itself, is a cumbersome task. So, it would be better to resize the pathways which already circulate around the city or connect cities. It would largely save funds as well as labour to be involved in making new roads and these resources can be used in other projects initiated by the governments.
In my perspective, enlarging the existing roads would be more economical option if there is no major inconvenience involved in the process for common people. Moreover, I think a middle approach should be adopted, likewise, constructing flyovers over the roads which will solve the traffic problem to great extent.
In conclusion, governments should ask for public opinion and take any step of modifying the road system after having a favorable consent from majority of the common people. Besides this, these projects should be planned by considering long - term benefits in the future.
- You are attending a part time course in a college Due to some problem you cannot continue your course Write a letter to your teacher Describe the course Explain the problem Explain the reason for not continuing Tell the teacher about your future plans 84
- Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines.Should parents be made by law to immunize their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunize their children? 89
- While studying some students take weekend or evening jobs to help with expenditure. How do you feel about this? What are the drawbacks and benefits of such a decision? 73
- Individual greed and selfishness have been the basis of the modern society Some people think that we must return to the older and more traditional values of respect for the family and the local community in order to create a better world to live in 92
- Machine translation (MT) is slower and less accurate than human translation and there is no immediate or predictable likelihood of machines taking over this role from humans. Do you agree or disagree?(Write at least 250 words) 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, likewise, moreover, so, well, i think, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10738255034 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77487937676 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58389261745 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2148726393 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.076923077 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156834103759 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589214783935 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039374778151 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887535182176 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296734717774 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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