Some people believe that having a conversation on a mobile phone in a public or crowded place should be banned. Others feel that we should be able to talk wherever we like. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many argue that phone calls should be restricted in public settings, some believe that people have their right to talk in any situation. It is agreed that while sometimes phone calls can be irritating, people have their own reasons for making phone calls. This essay will discuss both sides before coming to a conclusion.
It is true that calling someone via mobile phone can sometimes be an annoyance for people around. In public places where visitors need to be calm and quiet, a phone call may be a major interruption. For instance, chatting on a mobile phone in a public library will bother many who are trying to focus on reading and studying. Furthermore, many people make long phone calls on unimportant matters. In the lens of other people, these calls are merely a selfish act as it disturbs many people. Therefore, making phone calls in these areas is unacceptable.
However, not all phone calls are unimportant and people don’t have the choice of making or accepting calls in public areas. Everyone has their underlying reason to contact someone, it may be personal reasons, business, or emergency calls. These are reasons that the public couldn’t know and have to tolerate regardless of the place. When people receive a call from someone asking for emergency help, they have to accept it, despite being in public places. If they couldn’t make that calls, the consequences might be very serious. Hence, for this reason, banning calls in public places doesn’t make much sense.
In conclusion, the use of mobile phones to communicate in public areas may cause interruption for others, However, considering that there are important reasons to call, banning is not at all necessary.
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...the health of the public. For the record , diseases such as flu , polio and tetanu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, really, so, then, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23708206687 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82109555496 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519756838906 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5395101564 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7222222222 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2777777778 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174606954388 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682511179724 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080251315927 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14751757957 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0864207263474 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.