Many argue that phone calls should be restricted in public settings, some believe that people have their right to talk in any situation. It is agreed that while sometimes phone calls can be irritating, people have their own reasons for making phone calls. This essay will discuss both sides before coming to a conclusion.
It is true that calling someone via mobile phone can sometimes be an annoyance for people around. In public places where visitors need to be calm and quiet, a phone call may be a major interruption. For instance , chatting on mobile phone in public library will bother many who are trying to focus on reading and studying. Furthermore , many people make long phone calls on unimportant matters. In the lens of other people , these calls are merely a selfish act as it disturbs many people. Therefore, making phone calls in these areas are unacceptable.
However , not all phone calls are unimportant and people don’t have the choice of making or accepting calls in public areas. Everyone has their underlying reason to contact someone, it may be personal reasons , business , or emergency calls. These are reasons that the public couldn’t know and have to tolerate regardless of the place. When people receive a call from someone asking for emergency help, they have to accept it, despite being in public places. If they couldn’t make that calls , the consequences might be very serious. Hence , for this reason , banning calls in public places doesn’t make much sense.
In conclusion , the use of mobile phone to communicate in public areas may cause interruption for others , However , considering that there are important reasons to call , banning is not at all necessary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06785714286 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60875905899 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8581600209 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6875 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256214361997 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100554052656 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607113661957 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176607181404 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621975258049 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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