Some hobbies are relatively easy, while others tend to be quite difficult. Personally, I believe that both types of hobby can be fun, and I therefore disagree with the opinion that only difficult ones could bring people satisfaction.
On the one hand, easy activities can sometime bring people excitement. On example of this kind of activities would be swimming, which is easy to learn. I still remember learning to swim at my local pool when I was a child, and it never feel like anything challenging or demanding. Another hobby I find easy and fun is walking. In my opinion, all people need when walking is a pair of shoes. Although it has quite low requirement, walking surely can help people to take mind of things, alleviate insomnia and increase the quality of sleep.
On the other hand, difficult hobbies can be more exciting sometimes. If an activity is more challenging, it quite likely that we may fell a greater sense of satisfaction when we manage to do it successfully. For example, fly-board, which is a kind of water sports that require highly on skills, is really difficult for people to learn. In my case, it took me around one year before I became professional on this activity, and since then I could receive a huge amount of enjoyment everytime I doing fly-board. I think the main reason why difficult activities bring people satisfaction would have something to do with their achievement, this means that people feel extremely happy when they achieve some goals which are quite challenging.
In conclusion, enjoyable can be attained from both easy hobbies and difficult hobbies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 237, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'feels'?
Suggestion: feels
...l pool when I was a child, and it never feel like anything challenging or demanding....
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Line 5, column 485, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...ve a huge amount of enjoyment everytime I doing fly-board. I think the main reaso...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, really, so, still, then, therefore, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94074074074 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8147076003 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585185185185 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0034692674 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2857142857 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2771489159 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100516107691 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806124952874 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196095505209 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855033540781 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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