Some people believe that if people are allowed to work after the age of 60, it would cause problems for younger people. To what extent do you agree?
It is sometimes suggested that in certain countries old people are permit to labor in some jobs while young people take a lack of problems due to the pensioners. I strongly agree that teenagers are more productive than the golden-ager humans. Firstly, this essay will discuss the possible harmful for organizations, and secondly, it will analyze the imaginable difficulties for juniors.
The primary reason why big companies will be got the potential risks in the long run is that the seniors will work slowly than teenagers. This is because people under the age of 60, will not have a power for working every 8 to 20 hours per day. As a result lack of firms will not able to accept their goals. A prime example is Kazakhstan, where government prefer the pensioners rather than golden boys, as a result many companies was downgraded and Kazakhstan have the 122 place in the world to work for young people.
Another point to consider is that lack of juvenile will have problems with job. The reason for this is that companies will be equipped and teenagers cannot apply their documents. As a consequence they will look for new countries, where they can find a golden opportunity to send their information to any jobs. For instance, Russian boys and girls are prefer to work abroad due to the irresponsibility to be employment in the Russia.
In conclusion, I am firmly convinced that government in some countries should detect the problem and solve them because for youth it is key to success in the future. This is due to the fact that many organizations may have problems with pensioners and adolescents may have drawbacks with their vacancy for jobs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 252, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve than the golden-ager humans. Firstly, this essay will discuss the possible har...
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Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...or working every 8 to 20 hours per day. As a result lack of firms will not able to...
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Line 5, column 352, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'preferred'.
Suggestion: preferred
...or instance, Russian boys and girls are prefer to work abroad due to the irresponsibil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85211267606 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74742670535 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538732394366 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2996378922 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176212266419 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635813430401 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544388496229 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11137365074 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365901272149 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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