Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Requiring a job is an hour of need to people in the recent era and this issue is gaining maximum traction among the all countries. A few people believe that it is profitable to accept an unsatisfactory work or weakness of money, while others believe that it is superior to try and improving this situation. This essay will discuss both side of the argument in detail and provide evidence as to why striving and developing a bad situation is beneficial.
At the onset sometimes, accepting a bad condition is the best way for many people. If their have not anther key for earn money, they can definitely achieve any job. For example, my friend, whom father is farmer, is doing job as the security guard in the chemical company; he does not satisfy from his job. In case he leaves his job, he does not have any another way for earn money; therefore, this type of person is necessary to accept any unsatisfactory work.
On the another side of coin, people should doing to try for developing their bad situation because living cost Is increasing significantly to the day by day. In this situation, people can do to try to improve their income. If you do not try, you cannot improve your family’s economic growth. For example, Sanjay Raval, who is the best motivational speaker in Gujarat, was doing a job as assistant engineer on the construction site, but he was trying to developing his family and recently he is a contractor. Without try, you cannot successful in your life; therefore, trying is much more beneficial way in a bad situation.
In conclusion, plenty of people are suffering in bad situation. This essay discussed reasons for why some people are accepting any unsatisfactory work and why striving is the most efficient way to improve a bad situation. In my opinion, it is more profitable to trying and developing in a bad situation than accepting.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: try to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77160493827 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85219087023 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496913580247 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0921257772 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.066666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279000921562 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103856123348 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652830425729 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184697862402 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608432861982 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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