It is commonly thought that people ought to embrace bad situations like an unsatisfactory occupation or lack of money in life as it is without putting any efforts to ameliorate them, while others believe that it is best to improve those conditions. The idea of improvement, in my opinion, is the most appropriate option, as I believe that it can bring positive outcomes along with it.
On the one hand, according to the advocates of the first viewpoint, whatever the unpleasant event happens, it is better to accept it because they consider this phenomenon to be related to a destiny. In other words, there is a belief among these supporters that whatever in life is presupposed to be, it will definitely happen regardless of its prevention, and there is no use of trying to make the situation better because it will recover itself in any case. To illustrate, in the Eastern culture, the elderly people claim that if they have less money to make a living, they will have to tolerate and survive instead of trying to find ways to earn more money.
On the other hand, the opponents of this view say that making efforts to progress the unsatisfactory happenings is of paramount importance. This is due to the fact that life is not stable, and it always requires humans to take ceaseless actions in order to achieve desired results; otherwise, the situation will be exacerbated rather than improved. For example, a recent survey conducted in the USA has revealed that more than half of the working population reported that they ended up being unhappy throughout their whole life just simply because they never tried to change their jobs, which did not give them enough satisfaction.
In conclusion, although there are some people, who think that leaving the bad condition unchanged is the best, I tend to believe that there are also quite a large number of people with the opposite opinion, and I recommend that it is always good to take actions for the betterment of any negative occurrences.
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Whether to accept a bad…
Whether to accept a bad situation, or work on it to improve it, has been a topic of debate in our minds forever. A bad situation can be taken as an opportunity to test your strength to overcome hurdles in life, and also to see who are the real ones in our lives to help us out when we are actually in need. For instance, if you are broke and a friend lends you money, without any benefit of his own, that is when you know that he will be always there for you, no matter what.
Accepting a bad situation is only required until you are in it. Instead of blaming ourself for the crisis, just accept that it has happened and think about what can be done to overcome it. Idealize people’s stories to motivate yourself to move forward. For example, someone who worked a 9 to 5 job since years, suddenly realized that this is not what he wants to dobut has to do for a living. He quits the job and takes on his passion to earn a living. It may happen that he has less money initially, but at least he will be stress-free. He will be at peace because of that one moment that he decided to leave his old job and do what he actually loves.
There are a lot of inspiring stories aound us that makes us want to work hard and make a better lives for ourselves. I don’t think any of them were easy to achieve. Bad situations are like buses, they keep coming and going. It is totally upon us, whether we drop off at the right time to reach our destination. So, to conclude, accept a bad situation onlu till your in it, because once you get out of it, it will no more be bad situation but just a memory in our minds.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 156, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...nd to believe that there are also quite a large number of people with the opposite opinion, and I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in any case, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86803519062 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72750290707 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568914956012 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.6505423683 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 184.444444444 106.682146367 173% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.8888888889 20.7667163134 182% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231747328582 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866161302445 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608420086591 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134952436815 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509724805036 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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