It is a common belief that when facing a bad circumstance, such as job dissatisfaction or lack of money, the best option is to compromise with it. However, others argued that it is better to try and overcome such situations. I will discuss both views and explain my support for the latter view.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why people want to accept a bad situation. Firstly, they have been living with it for a long time and feel unsecured to leave it behind. For example, employees have a stable career with one employee, generating them good income even though it does not bring any happiness at work. Secondly, many people believe that good things might come after a bad situation. For instance, some people who do a passionate job but have lack money, keeping in mind that following passion will pay off.
On the other hand, working hard to overcome such situations can help to rise in a professional career, leading to a successful life. In fact, many examples throughout history about people who became successful by conquering difficult circumstances. To illustrate that point, George Washington had trouble with spelling and grammar. Despite his learning disability, he tackled his problems and became the Founding Father of the United States of America. Moreover, people who improvise and bypass their issues can gain more experience in their personal development. This is because they learn it hard way during the improvement process.
In conclusion, although compromising a bad situation seems like an easy choice, it is undeniable that this approach does not help people in long term. Personally, I believe people should try to improvise and overcome their problems because it allows them to unlock their potential.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 192, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...ver, others argued that it is better to try and overcome such situations. I will discus...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08680555556 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77789713285 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628472222222 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.4481755997 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.5625 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9375 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271940650054 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768545178535 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070463777036 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159592523985 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0951564205054 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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