Instead of working for other businesses, a large number of people are turning to self-employment these days. This essay will explore what might be behind this trend and outline two of the drawbacks that working for yourself can bring.
One of the most significant reasons why many individuals are deciding to go self-employed could be that there are now fewer barriers to this form of employment than there were in the past. Due to the technological advancements introduced by the modern age, people can now set up their own businesses more easily. For instance, whereas thirty years ago self- employed tutors would have to rent classrooms, pay for equipment and share teaching materials in person, now they can run their operations from the comfort of their own home so long as they have an internet connection.
However, running your own business can present a number of difficulties, chief among them financial insecurity. In contrast to employment within a company, in which a regular pay check can be expected on the same day each month, self-employment does not guarantee a fixed salary and can rely instead on a feast-or-famine type of income. Moreover, those who work for themselves cannot typically enjoy company perks, such as health insurance, holiday time and pension schemes. This can exacerbate the sense of financial anxiety which some self-employed people must face.
In conclusion, although the internet has helped many people to enter self- employment, this type of work still carries disadvantages, including economic uncertainty and the absence of benefits packages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...nstead of working for other businesses, a large number of people are turning to self-employment t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, still, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28346456693 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9880515151 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665354330709 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.6830869648 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.2 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363386581778 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135465328749 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0984468596011 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214622012022 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718452377605 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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