In life, people sometimes have to face with a serious problem, such as lack of money, or an unsatisfactory occupation. In that case, numerous people consider that giving up is the best solution, while others manage to find ways to solve the issue. Both ways of thinking are reasonable and can be useful in some situations.
On one hand, some people will find that accepting a bad situation is a reasonable choice. The first major reason for that thinking is that it gives people the feeling of being safe. Some individuals will find them at risk if they manage to change the current circumstance, so they are shunned from trying. Another reason which prevents people from trying is that they may feel inadequate to handle such situations. It may be due to the feeling that they are not equipped to solve the problem that they are in. For instance, if a person lacks money, he may try to find a better job with a higher salary. However, lack of qualifications might prevent him from doing that.
On the other hand, other people believe that it is better not to give up and try to improve such situations. One remarkable advantage of this choice is that it helps improve one’s living condition. For example, when a person is unemployed, if he manages to find a job, his life’s quality will be improved and he will no longer be unemployed. Another major benefit is that overcoming a problem can broaden one’s horizon. During the process of solving a serious issue, people can learn new useful skills and get more experience. Moreover, they can gain certain confidence to deal with any further bumps in the future.
In conclusion, I believe that both ways of thinking about how to deal with an issue are reasonable and will be useful in some relevant situations. People have to give decisions on how to solve that problem based on their abilities and the results that they will get back.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 568, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a person lacks money, he may try to find a better job with a higher salary. Howev...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72590361446 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57524836133 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496987951807 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.4224314493 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.1666666667 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230956521455 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771147812598 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841091461292 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146866141307 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371778794105 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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