Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Many people consider that accepting a bad situation that happened to us like a job that someone finds unsatisfactory or having money problem. However, others have a different notion, which is that trying for better outcomes or improving the situations is more fundamental than just accepting them. This essay agrees with trying to be better because it allows personal growth.
Some people choose to accept when something bad happens to them because their fate gives them an opportunity to continue. By being okay with what life offers to them, they feel psychological relief. Furthermore, they do not feel an obligation to look forward. Therefore, they think that they will not lose what they already have. In other words, not taking any risks gives them relief so that they can continue doing what they already do. For example, a study has recently found that 58% of people choose to stay stuck in a job they do not even want to.
While some are just accepting something that is bad, others think that how the situation can be better because they see this as a chance to grow. When they decide to be better, they also choose to be open to new experiences. By just trying to improve what they already have, they take new courses or meet new people. Therefore, these experiences have also led to personal growth because of the novelty of doing something new. For example, Elon Musk, who is a well-known entrepreneur, failed so many times yet continued to improve himself and the situation he was in. The things he learned from his experience have resulted in him being a millionaire.
In conclusion, some people deal with a bad situation by accepting it so they can continue. Others consider a bad situation as a way that leads to growth. In my opinion, the best way to deal with a bad thing is to think of it as an opportunity to be better. Trying to be better can lead to personal growth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, look, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69069069069 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5831516937 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501501501502 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6200014294 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2105263158 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5263157895 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47368421053 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226204297838 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844108974223 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728550970079 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175136586219 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0815204028962 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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