It is globally argued whether we should endure hardships in our life or make a determined effort to make it better. While somebody will accept harsh realities, I suppose to tip the scale in favor of enhancing situations. This essay will discuss both views and express my perspectives.
On the one side, the reason why people accept their bad situations can be attributed to their lack of confidence to make any decisions to their lives, they believe that making any changes can be deemed absolutely risky and may lead to awful consequences. For example, when people stick to their current jobs, although they have to perform do mundane tasks or don’t have a competitive salary, they ensure the sense of security that they can earn a living by means of that job. If they make an effort to seek find new jobs, they may find themselves struggling to adapt to a new environment and new tasks, let alone having satisfaction.
On the flip side, I totally agree that it is worth attempting to enhance our lives. Firstly, there is a wide range of inventions that stand the test of time and they are living proof that people are developing and evolving to endure the challenges of nature. But for the absence of human awareness, we can not have reach state-of-the-art technology like we are now. Secondly, enabling actions to solve hardships can acquire your problem-solving skill and help you to discover your newfound inner abilities. The young workforce nowadays is a good example for this. They are not afraid of moving to other sectors in the industry for the sake of earning more attractive salaries
In conclusion, although accepting bad situations can prevent people from unpredictable awful results, I strongly believe that it is beneficial to take measures to enhance negative circumstances, not only to develop problem-solving skills, but also to reach your stunning achievements.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 202, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve that making any changes can be deemed absolutely risky and may lead to awful c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, i suppose, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01904761905 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89706848295 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596825396825 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.3852534159 49.4020404114 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.75 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131977717472 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420139833962 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043157483036 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0856256442518 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364213255618 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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