Nowadays, when there is a massive increase happens with the fee of entering tertiary education, it is argued that governments should abolish tuition fee for students, regardless of their socio-economic backgrounds. In my perspective, i totally disagree with this statement and this essay will explain my points.
Firstly, imposing free-college policy for higher education can have tremendously adverse effect on students, especially when they seek jobs for the sake of attractive salaries. When everybody can pursue the college without fee, they can have their own bachelor's degree, which create a huge number of educated workforce. However, in a competitive workforce market where occupational opportunities are limited, the acquisition of a tertiary degree is no longer valued and students may find it struggling to be distinct from other competitors.
Secondly, the provision of free-of-charge education may cause the shortage in government's budget. Annually, there is a rapid and consistent increase of students who have a tendency to pursuit higher education, while there are myriads sectors of the industry, which are as imperative as education, must be paid by governments. In the circumstances of Covid 19 Pandemic, the expenditure for vaccination and medicine is truthfully exorbitant expenditure for governments. In a result, covering the university fee for all students may beyond their abilities.
In conclusion, tuition waiving seems to be a good idea, however it can not be applied into practice due to some factors that I aformentioned.
- Some people think that everyone has the right to have access to university education and that government should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Some students prefer to take a gap year and between high school university to work or to travel Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 89
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as unsatifactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
- Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
- Some people think that everyone has the right to have access to university education and that government should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...students may beyond their abilities. In conclusion, tuition waiving seems to be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, may, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61440677966 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27681028384 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631355932203 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6210430552 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.5 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183467517971 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067810037329 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039107991741 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0916878213162 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547862647204 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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