In life, poor circumstances sometimes can happen in our life. While some people think that the best way to deal with them is by accepting it, others choose to strive and try to make a better situation. I completely agree with the latter that struggling to change into better situation is the best choice when facing unwanted circumstances.
On the one side, some people choose to accept unwanted situations that happened to them. This is because they do not want to feel stressed as a result of struggling to change the situation. Consequently, their life will be happier and less stressful. For example, some people who are paid with low wages choose to accept their situation and are not thinking about solutions to get out from the circumstances. Because they just do what they need to do and not striving to search for solutions, they become happy and stress-free
On the other side, other people decide to struggle to change the unwanted situations which occur. This is because they want to get out of such situation and they believe that struggling will bring them into a better situation. As a result, many of them finally can get out from those situations and achieve what they hope. For instance, a guy feels uncomfortable with his current job description as a salesperson. Because of that, he keeps working on improving other skills which can help him to get another position. Finally, his hard work pays off and he can get the job that he wants.
In conclusion, accepting unwanted situations is good because it can make people happier and stress-free, but struggling to change the situation is better because it can change their unwanted situations into better situations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91958041958 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74098444824 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48951048951 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4443520432 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.5 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227120479923 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823137566071 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666110439377 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154223017151 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297872450692 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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