Some people think that the best way to deal with bad situation is by accepting it, while others believe that striving and improving the situation is better. I completely agree with the latter statement.
On the one hand, when facing unwanted circumstances, some people choose to accept them. This is because they think that those situations can't be changed anymore. Thus, it all depends on people's reaction towards it. For instance, an employee named John, experiences bad situation where he is only paid with low wage. John thinks that although he works hard, his condition won't be changed. So, he decided to just accept his situation. And because he does not try to change his situation, his condition never changes.
On the other hand, some people choose to improve bad situations which happen to them. This is because they believe that if they keep struggling and striving, those bad situations will change into better situations. For example, a basketball legend, Michael Jordan, was not a great basketball player in his teenage life in 1982. But he never gave up and worked really hard to improve his performance. As a result, we all know Michael Jordan as one of the greatest NBA players in history.
In conclusion, I personally agree with the latter statement because I believe that if we keep trying and striving our bad conditions will turn into better conditions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ecause they think that those situations cant be changed anymore. Thus, it all depend...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1153.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99134199134 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6179132458 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597402597403 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4812000298 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8666666667 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225709450872 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779816934599 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0955673587954 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159137095027 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0771505797342 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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